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Links for today’s lesson – https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_wr66A7u8j9hNDbI2aIF7KLK4r5pa3BW8DeaJUg1mOs/edit
Links for today’s lesson – https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1do9eqavsUUczk81lOCJxRnFZz1F9iRvb3K86VWWi96Q/edit#slide=id.g2c387e4a202_0_66
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Heather P Teacher commented on a Photo in the group 4529-Wonders G2A- 1 on 1-30 Lessons-Heather P 1 month ago
Good work! You can read me these in class.
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4385-Grammar G3 2 Students – Amanda 1 month ago
The conclusion needs to restate one idea from your body paragraphs in a sentence — one sentence per body paragraph. Then you need to link the conclusion to your introduction. The body paragraphs should be about equal in length. What does ‘tired of time’ mean? Put a comma after wore. Avoid using ‘supposed’ in writing. How does it ‘let…[Read more]
Don’t give examples in the intro. Use background information, a short anecdote, a quote, or a rhetorical question to begin your intro. Your these needs to not have a list. It also needs to agree in tense. The first reason needs to not repeat words — usually is repeated. Avoid the use of informal words like ‘hang of it’ in formal essays.…[Read more]
Christina Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4277-Phonics L2 – 1on1 -Tue/Fri CDT-30lessons -Saima 1 month, 1 week ago
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Please use this format to submit your homework from 3-10-24. Happy writing!
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Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4385-Grammar G3 2 Students – Amanda 1 month, 1 week ago
Performance is misspelled.
Vegetables
Avoid using get repeatedly.
Don’t repeat the same sentence in second paragraph. Change it to say something different that supports your topic.
Put a colon instead of a period after reasons — do not the next word after the period.
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