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Jennifer LeRoy created the doc Lesson #1 Plan – 3-3-24 – Write Source 4 – Please complete your homework for 3-10-24 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Write Source G4 starting Sunday, 3/3/24, 4:00-4:40 p.m. EST Lesson 1 – The Writing Process
Write Source G4 introduction
Jen Li commented on a Photo in the group 部编二年级上(Alica) 1on1 (02/26-07/09) Friday 5:50-6:50 PM CDT -20lessons-Lingling-2021 spring 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Abbi Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4675-wonders G1-1on1 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Hi! I’m sorry, I’m not sure what happened there. But you’re correct, it should be either “is going” or “went”. Sorry about that! Looking at it again I’m not sure why I crossed out the ‘is’. So it’s actually correct as it is written. Thanks for double-checking!
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4672-Writing G6 1 on 1 – Andrew 1 month, 2 weeks ago
This is a well-thought-out paragraph with a few minor changes I think you will have an edited draft. Try to avoid preparing words and phrases and simplify some sentences when you find you are using longer terms that might be rewarded more directly. Over all as always wonderful work. you have all the parts and have taken your time to introduce your…[Read more]
It was turned into an instead of we or the American government turned it…
is a powerful geyser simple reword for clarity
suggestions Simple call it Old Faithful as it is a title it doesn’t need the article the
Really well done I have offered a re rewording suggestions to avoid repeating ideas or words with the same tone however
They and the things around them are well appreciated- It is easy to appreciate these amazing natural wonders.
suggestions- consider rewording to something like -are examples of nature’s amazing creative power. Or examples of natural amazing creations. (Try to avoid repeating phrases.
vivan commented on a Photo in the group R4675-wonders G1-1on1 1 month, 3 weeks ago
hi, abbi, if the “is” be removed, should we modify the “going” into”went”? I am not sure
LIANG LI commented on a Photo in the group 4423-Wonders 2 Students Mon-15 Lessons-Christina-2023 Spring 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Christina Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4277-Phonics L2 – 1on1 -Tue/Fri CDT-30lessons -Saima 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Good work, Sophia! Remember to add the quotation marks at the end of dialogue and try to spell “house” again. Maybe add an “a” before the word “tornado”. Good work!
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4685-writing G5-1on1-40mins-15lessons 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Corrections Formal clothes are/sometimes a blazer, Play on the IPad Overall this is well done you have done great sharing about your friend. There were a few minor grammar errors which I shared above. YOu have some great details and did well taking our outline to create a well-thought-out essay. You could consider adding some personality…[Read more]