G Ayala commented on a Photo in the group English Reading And Writing (G3-4)-Advanced-EWG4L2SU1000AM 4 years, 5 months ago
The paper was very well written! You could have utilized one of the ways to introduce the paper , such was the assignment this week. It needed to be a quote, question or strong statement. Yours counts as a statement but it was not necessarily an attention grabber. Also , the thesis statement is your map to the rest of the paper. According to the…[Read more]
G Ayala liked a Photo in the group English Reading And Writing (G3-4)-Advanced-EWG4L2SU1000AM 4 years, 5 months ago