Tyrone Mendez commented on a Photo in the group 225860_Writing G2-3 2students (12/22-2022/7/13) Wed 6:00-7:00 PM CDT-30lessons- Meagan – 2021winter 1 year, 9 months ago
Good job Cynthia! I can’t wait to try freezing Apples. Thank you for your creativity an a good idea. There is a way to make this even better which we will go over in class. One way to improve it is to provide a good description as to how the Apples feel and taste after they come out of the freezer. Are they hard or soft? Do they taste even…[Read more]
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Tyrone Mendez commented on a Photo in the group 196877_Writing G2 (9/8-10/27) Mon 3:00-3:45pm,Thur3:00-3:45pmCDT -15lessons-Stella-2021fall 1 year, 10 months ago
Great job, Isabelle! It’s a great essay with good arguments. There is a couple more changes to make: “…as well as a supportive environment.WAB is special because…” There needs to be a space after the period, before WAB. Second, “If we have Summer break the time we will have…” There should be a comma after the word “break”, before the…[Read more]
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