Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group 5043-writing G2-2students 4 months ago
Favorite Why does it taste different in California? What does it taste like? what is it made out of?
Don’t forget to add the punctuation at the end of sentences.
Restaurant — this is the correct spelling.
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 6 months ago
Good job!
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 7 months, 3 weeks ago
Capitalize the important words in the title. Use more than one sentence per paragraph.
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 9 months, 2 weeks ago
beginning. We need to work on comma usage.
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Great ideas!
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Be sure to use proper capitalization in the title. Dining is the correct spelling — not two n’s. Write out the numbers like forty. Do not put a comma before the word because.
Abbi Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4675-wonders G1-1on1 11 months, 1 week ago
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4583-Writing G3 1 on 1(Allie)-15lessons-Amanda 1 year, 1 month ago
Correct the run-on’s.
Capitalize the title.
Abbi Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4675-wonders G1-1on1 1 year, 2 months ago
Hi! I’m sorry, I’m not sure what happened there. But you’re correct, it should be either “is going” or “went”. Sorry about that! Looking at it again I’m not sure why I crossed out the ‘is’. So it’s actually correct as it is written. Thanks for double-checking!
vivan commented on a Photo in the group R4675-wonders G1-1on1 1 year, 2 months ago
hi, abbi, if the “is” be removed, should we modify the “going” into”went”? I am not sure
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4583-Writing G3 1 on 1(Allie)-15lessons-Amanda 1 year, 2 months ago
Great job!
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 1 year, 2 months ago
You need to add another sentence explaining your examples in each body paragraph. You need to restate your opinion in the conclusion.
Remember to check for spelling and grammar. You misspelled ‘you’ in the last paragraph.
Corinne Teacher commented on a Photo in the group 4487-Beast Academy G3C – 2Students – Fri & Sat 7:30-8:30PM CDT-30lessons – Corinne 1 year, 2 months ago
Very nice and neat, thank you!
Very good! Thank