My rank for the quiz was 33980 points and rank was 1/2

This is a wonderful description of this fun creature. You created wonderful clear sentences with great details about the type of box creature. There is a topic sentence as well as well thought details and correct grammar.

This looks fantastic what a good idea to compair to characters. you are right they have a lot in common but both are also very different. Wonderful work and great job creating a wonderful diagrams.

This is a great brainstorming good work. Sounds like a fun trip. You correctly used the brainstorm and were able to create a wonderful example.

Was it ok if I used First, Second , Third, Fourth, Fifth and Finally transition words instead of First,next, then, and finally?
_Barbara 🙂

It is possible if so thanks for telling me.

I meant this:
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BTW: I think there is 2 pages of the same thing. Just a note.:)

question: Do we also do the excersices or no? Just wondering, TY! 🙂

This is a wonderful journal thank you for writing so many entries and sharing your ideas with me. I agree summer can be very nice. It is a great time of year I enjoy gardening myself.

Thank you for turning in these writing assignments they are well done and I really like the amount of detail you have included keep each assignment shows more progress and great work.

As I said in class I really love this poem it is well done and is wonderful. You describe the feeling of being hungry very well.

This is helpful

I like the introduction perhaps consider telling us what sort of stuff can we learn from the book.. Example: You might learn how to make friends. I like how you shared the main idea that Anne had a lot of energy. You might also comment that what it is they wanted from the child they adopted. It is true they have a hard start. Instead of saying…[Read more]

Very good job Barbara 🙂 No spelling or grammar errors and all the vocabulary words are used correctly.