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Barbara

@barbara active 1 year, 1 month ago

@stella please find Barbara’s homework here with. View

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Very good Barb @barbara. 15/15.
@barbara This was the test for lesson 20. Did you finish it already ?.. I didn’t see anyone completing it or posting it.
- Barbara replied 2 years, 7 months ago
  
  Yeah I finished it last week but I think I forgot to post it here it is
Barb, your story writing style has matured a lot! I love how you narrate the story! You did a good job using interjections and detailed descriptions for your writing! Love it!
@barbara
ms stella
Barb, I love how you close your writing by emphasizing how fun it was. I think it would be better for you to list out few fun rides that you want to recommend!
Great job!
@barbara
ms stella
Editing: “I felt a whole lot better after my mom’s help and comfort.”
Great piece!
ms stella
@barbara
Barb, your story is impeccable!!! I am so proud of how well you can write now!!
What a nice story you have created!!
ms stella
@barbara
Barb, I love all three expressions of anger. The last one “tears bursting out of eyes” is especially good!
Keep up the good work!
@barbara
ms stella
Barb, I am head to heel in love with the story you wrote!!! You even used humor in your writing! That is BIG progress!! I love how well you described the fox by saying he even ate the bad grapes! LOL!
Great job!
ms stella
@barbara
Lovely story!
I love how roller-coaster the plot reads and a nice solution in the end.
The small conversations you designed in the story have made your characters more alive and relatable.
great job!
ms stella
@barbara
Barb, I appreciate your hard work and wonderful ideas in your writing. However, you didn’t use all the FANBOYS words with correct grammar. Remember to add a comma in front of the FANBOYS word and follow it with a complete sentence instead of fragments.
For example, I love arts and crafts, and I can do it all the time.
@barbara
Barb, you did a good job finding similarities two different things share, remember to only compare TWO things in a metaphor and simile. Correction “My bed is an enormous elephant” Also add explanation at the end of each metaphor. For example, My bed is an enormous elephant, I can even play tag with my friends in it. @barbara ms stella
Very thorough explanation! Good job, Barb!
Correction: ” I look forward to seeing what my presents are very much!” “But I’m very excited about what the next presents are going to be!”
@barbara
Wow! Nice writing! 🙂
@barbara
Correction: “for a week of drinking soda, your intake of sugar will be 5432 calories.
Comment:
I love how you picked this angle to argue the point.
However, these two points are essentially the same thing.
Please come up with a different point to back up your point. 🙂
ms stella
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