Good job!

Good job!

Capitalize the important words in the title. Use more than one sentence per paragraph.

beginning. We need to work on comma usage.

Great ideas!

Be sure to use proper capitalization in the title. Dining is the correct spelling — not two n’s. Write out the numbers like forty. Do not put a comma before the word because.

Good work, Sophia! Remember to add the quotation marks at the end of dialogue and try to spell “house” again. Maybe add an “a” before the word “tornado”. Good work!

Great work, Sophia! These are wonderful sentences! In the last sentence, make sure that you have a lower-case “w” with “where”. Also, make sure you have a capital “Y” with “You” at the end of that same sentence. Well done! @morningpiano

Great job, Sophia! In the first sentence, you can add “a” before “homeless shelter”. The same is true for the sentence about the “winter coat”. You can add “a” before “winter coat”. Well done! @morningpiano

You need to add another sentence explaining your examples in each body paragraph. You need to restate your opinion in the conclusion.

Remember to check for spelling and grammar. You misspelled ‘you’ in the last paragraph.

Remember to always use a capital letter at the start of a sentence (“Last”). You can also add a comma after “Last”. I think you have corrected “fun” on your own. Great job! And well done using all the words in a story!

Great work, Sophia. Look at the word “tested” the second time you use it.

Thank you Ms. Christina! See you later!

2A
8- C is incorrect.

2B – All are correct