here is the homework from last week with some corrections.
– Good start, assignment was a 5 paragraphs so you need to add 4 more.
– It was a great start in descriptions, in each paragraph you will need to add more. the red underlines are words that I am not sure what they are and one is we never start sentences with the but.
here is the homework from last week with some corrections.
– Good start, assignment was a 5 paragraphs so you need to add 4 more.
– It was a great start in descriptions, in each paragraph you will need to add more. the red underlines are words that I am not sure what they are and one is we never start sentences with the but.