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Why does it taste different in California? What does it taste like? what is it made out of?

Don’t forget to add the punctuation at the end of sentences.

Restaurant — this is the correct spelling.

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Capitalize the important words in the title. Use more than one sentence per paragraph.

beginning. We need to work on comma usage.

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Be sure to use proper capitalization in the title. Dining is the correct spelling — not two n’s. Write out the numbers like forty. Do not put a comma before the word because.

Correct the run-on’s.

Capitalize the title.

The conclusion needs to restate one idea from your body paragraphs in a sentence — one sentence per body paragraph. Then you need to link the conclusion to your introduction.
The body paragraphs should be about equal in length. What does ‘tired of time’ mean? Put a comma after wore. Avoid using ‘supposed’ in writing. How does it ‘let…[Read more]

Don’t give examples in the intro. Use background information, a short anecdote, a quote, or a rhetorical question to begin your intro. Your these needs to not have a list. It also needs to agree in tense. The first reason needs to not repeat words — usually is repeated. Avoid the use of informal words like ‘hang of it’ in formal essays.…[Read more]

Performance is misspelled.

Vegetables

Avoid using get repeatedly.

Don’t repeat the same sentence in second paragraph. Change it to say something different that supports your topic.

Put a colon instead of a period after reasons — do not the next word after the period.