Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 6 months ago
Good job!
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 7 months, 3 weeks ago
Capitalize the important words in the title. Use more than one sentence per paragraph.
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 9 months, 2 weeks ago
beginning. We need to work on comma usage.
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Great ideas!
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Be sure to use proper capitalization in the title. Dining is the correct spelling — not two n’s. Write out the numbers like forty. Do not put a comma before the word because.
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 1 year, 2 months ago
You need to add another sentence explaining your examples in each body paragraph. You need to restate your opinion in the conclusion.
Remember to check for spelling and grammar. You misspelled ‘you’ in the last paragraph.
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group 4415-Public Speaking 2 Students- Wed 7:00-7:40 AM CDT-30 Lessons – Amanda-2023 Spring 1 year, 10 months ago
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group 4415-Public Speaking 2 Students- Wed 7:00-7:40 AM CDT-30 Lessons – Amanda-2023 Spring 1 year, 11 months ago
Add a sentence to each paragraph so that you have the point fully explained. You have a great start.
Saima Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R3967_Write source G2 2students (03/04-09/23) Fri 07:10-07:50PM CDT -30lessons-Jenna-2022 Spring 2 years, 8 months ago
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