Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4273-Write Source G3 – 2students Sat07:00-07:40AM CDT -30lessons-Saima 3 months, 1 week ago
You need to add another sentence explaining your examples in each body paragraph. You need to restate your opinion in the conclusion.
Remember to check for spelling and grammar. You misspelled ‘you’ in the last paragraph.
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group 4415-Public Speaking 2 Students- Wed 7:00-7:40 AM CDT-30 Lessons – Amanda-2023 Spring 11 months, 1 week ago
Amanda J Teacher commented on a Photo in the group 4415-Public Speaking 2 Students- Wed 7:00-7:40 AM CDT-30 Lessons – Amanda-2023 Spring 1 year ago
Add a sentence to each paragraph so that you have the point fully explained. You have a great start.
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⭐Fantastic work!
third line: wich = which
Only indent the first sentence in a paragraph.
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