Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4528_342273_Wordly Wise 3000 G3 +Phonics L3-5 1on1 -Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-30lessons-Heather 1 week, 4 days ago
The details are wonderful and you have many wonderfully worded sentences. You have shared some great sensory details like the small of the dusty dry air. You have edited and made this writing very clean and clear. I especially enjoyed reading the silly ending of the story. This is fantastic work!
Lijun Liu commented on a Photo in the group R4471-Singapore Math 3D-1 On1 -30lessons-Dmyphna 4 months, 1 week ago
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Dymphna Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4471-Singapore Math 3D-1 On1 -30lessons-Dmyphna 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4528_342273_Wordly Wise 3000 G3 +Phonics L3-5 1on1 -Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-30lessons-Heather 5 months ago
GReat questions be sure to double-check the spelling of the change it should have an e. Great work though!
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4528_342273_Wordly Wise 3000 G3 +Phonics L3-5 1on1 -Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-30lessons-Heather 5 months, 2 weeks ago
the funniest thing to happen in my life. The main area to keep in mind it the tense of words is should be was when talking about a past event. You hav ea fun story and followed the paragraph format you understood how to add in details like the cold water and the red face. This shows instead of just telling.
In my life, many funny things have happened to me the funniest thing happened at school ever since that day I always check my chair for water. I went out to play … my chair was dry. outside because .. it was I sat down on my chair. .. the water was icy cold. laughter
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4528_342273_Wordly Wise 3000 G3 +Phonics L3-5 1on1 -Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-30lessons-Heather 5 months, 3 weeks ago
1. Gives us 2, Gave me 3. First, 4. Rainy days or sunny days no mater what the weather is he is waiing outside school for me.
This is a wonderful writing with great examples be sure to be careful of tenses and wording I have posted other comments with some corrections. but wonderful work.
1. got hurt.. because of this small act of kindness they became my best friends. 2. always. 3. But I was afraid to ask 4.my teahcer saw me almost raise my hand and said ” If you have a questions.. “
Corrections 1. would help me to answer it. 2. When I am hurt… 3. Sometimes my friends give me snacks when I am really hungry. 4. outside 5. ,that is fun to. 6. Always play together. 7. always by my side
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4528_342273_Wordly Wise 3000 G3 +Phonics L3-5 1on1 -Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-30lessons-Heather 6 months ago
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There is a lot of … Playground is a compound word My best friends often play there with me. This is a wonderful paragraph but I think the second page turned in goes with another assignment if you have a second page feel free to add it and turn it in to be revied.
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4528_342273_Wordly Wise 3000 G3 +Phonics L3-5 1on1 -Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-30lessons-Heather 6 months, 2 weeks ago
the last page may belong to another assignment but this story is very fun Lily your writing is wonderful. Just consider where you might add details of what you see, hear, feel, taste, and touch this will add more to this wonderful tale. a few corrections are above mostly to do with tense.
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4528_342273_Wordly Wise 3000 G3 +Phonics L3-5 1on1 -Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-30lessons-Heather 7 months, 1 week ago
Suggestions for writing 1. No need for And you can say The shelf is always full of candy and toys. 2. It always smells wonderful because of all the tasty treats..is the smell sweet or like meat 3. Something is a compound word so these should go together without a space 4. Something This sounds like a wonderful shop thank you for a…[Read more]
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4528_342273_Wordly Wise 3000 G3 +Phonics L3-5 1on1 -Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-30lessons-Heather 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Wonderful work with your questons !
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4528_342273_Wordly Wise 3000 G3 +Phonics L3-5 1on1 -Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-30lessons-Heather 7 months, 3 weeks ago
Spring Festival -capitalize as it is proper noun a name of a holiday or person 2. snow is falling down from the sky 3.light the world 4.People wearing new clothes are 5.laughing becaues they know they are… 6. I love/like the Spring… Teacher feedback- This is a really good paragaph about different things that happen during the…[Read more]
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 248324_WW3000 G2 2Students (4/3-2022/7/10) Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-15lessons – Heather-2022Summer 1 year, 1 month ago
When did the internet start or when was the internet created? Overall as always great work with your homework I have offered on suggestion for wording with one of your questions.
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 248324_WW3000 G2 2Students (4/3-2022/7/10) Sun7:20-8:00AM CDT-15lessons – Heather-2022Summer 1 year, 2 months ago
Your phonics as always are wonderfuly done. A few suggestions for your sentences are below. Sometimes I have a bad attitude. I gave a little hint about… Animals are kept in individual stalls. If I have the solution for the problems on the test I will be fine.
these are fantastice and you did a great job correcting errors wonderful work this week homework is well done!