Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4685-writing G5-1on1-40mins-15lessons 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Just be sure to add some sentences which are both short t and long. consider sentences which you might add more detail like you might explain one or two of the main positions instead of only listing. Adding a bit more detail will enhance the work.
This is a very good paragraph and explains the rules of soccer well.
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4685-writing G5-1on1-40mins-15lessons 2 months ago
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Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4685-writing G5-1on1-40mins-15lessons 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Corrections Formal clothes are/sometimes a blazer, Play on the IPad Overall this is well done you have done great sharing about your friend. There were a few minor grammar errors which I shared above. YOu have some great details and did well taking our outline to create a well-thought-out essay. You could consider adding some personality…[Read more]
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4685-writing G5-1on1-40mins-15lessons 2 months, 4 weeks ago
These are wonderfully done good work with reviewing the grammar!
Great work all your answers are well done!
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group 4685-writing G5-1on1-40mins-15lessons 3 months ago
This is clearly written and states your point well.
Here are a few suggestions on how yo rephrase your paragraph so it will sound a bit more fleshed out and full. I would choose hamburgers if I had to pick my favorite food. They look delicious! The juice that drips out of them when you bite in makes a drip sound on my plate. The burger smells like meaty incense and draws you in. The bread is soft…[Read more]