It was turned into an instead of we or the American government turned it…

is a powerful geyser simple reword for clarity

suggestions Simple call it Old Faithful as it is a title it doesn’t need the article the

Really well done I have offered a re rewording suggestions to avoid repeating ideas or words with the same tone however

They and the things around them are well appreciated- It is easy to appreciate these amazing natural wonders.

suggestions- consider rewording to something like -are examples of nature’s amazing creative power. Or examples of natural amazing creations. (Try to avoid repeating phrases.

Corrections Formal clothes are/sometimes a blazer, Play on the IPad
Overall this is well done you have done great sharing about your friend. There were a few minor grammar errors which I shared above. YOu have some great details and did well taking our outline to create a well-thought-out essay. You could consider adding some personality…[Read more]

Wonderful job with all your pages these look great if you have any questions please feel free to ask me.

Looks great wonderful work

This looks very good andrew

These are wonderfully done good work with reviewing the grammar!

Great work all your answers are well done!

This is clearly written and states your point well.

Here are a few suggestions on how yo rephrase your paragraph so it will sound a bit more fleshed out and full.
I would choose hamburgers if I had to pick my favorite food. They look delicious! The juice that drips out of them when you bite in makes a drip sound on my plate. The burger smells like meaty incense and draws you in. The bread is soft…[Read more]

These are correct great work!

This is an amazing rewrite and sounds wonderful. You have added the needed details and created a wonderful paragraph that flows from one topic to the next with really nice clear sentences.

This looks fantastic you have shared some good insights and carefully thought about the chapters you have read thus far.

Your paragraph captures the essence of what makes a perfect summer day, and you’ve included several key elements. Here are a few suggestions to enhance clarity and flow:
1. Clarity and Structure:
• Each sentence could focus on a specific aspect of a perfect summer day.
• For example, one sentence could discuss the importance of clear skies, ano…[Read more]

Rgus us well-written and very detailed. You have been able to add information that makes instructions clear. There are areas with longer wording or more than one comma consider making some sentences shorter. Keep in mind short and long variations offer a variety of sentence structures.