Christina Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4277-Phonics L2 – 1on1 -Tue/Fri CDT-30lessons -Saima 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Christina Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4277-Phonics L2 – 1on1 -Tue/Fri CDT-30lessons -Saima 2 months, 1 week ago
Good work, Sophia! Remember to add the quotation marks at the end of dialogue and try to spell “house” again. Maybe add an “a” before the word “tornado”. Good work!
Christina Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4277-Phonics L2 – 1on1 -Tue/Fri CDT-30lessons -Saima 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Great work, Sophia! These are wonderful sentences! In the last sentence, make sure that you have a lower-case “w” with “where”. Also, make sure you have a capital “Y” with “You” at the end of that same sentence. Well done! @morningpiano
Christina Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4277-Phonics L2 – 1on1 -Tue/Fri CDT-30lessons -Saima 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Great job, Sophia! In the first sentence, you can add “a” before “homeless shelter”. The same is true for the sentence about the “winter coat”. You can add “a” before “winter coat”. Well done! @morningpiano
Christina Teacher commented on a Photo in the group R4277-Phonics L2 – 1on1 -Tue/Fri CDT-30lessons -Saima 3 months, 1 week ago
Remember to always use a capital letter at the start of a sentence (“Last”). You can also add a comma after “Last”. I think you have corrected “fun” on your own. Great job! And well done using all the words in a story!
Great work, Sophia. Look at the word “tested” the second time you use it.
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group R4566-Writing G4 -2students-Catherine,Chloe 3 months, 2 weeks ago
This is an amazing rewrite and sounds wonderful. You have added the needed details and created a wonderful paragraph that flows from one topic to the next with really nice clear sentences.
Jing Yang commented on a Photo in the group R4277-Phonics L2 – 1on1 -Tue/Fri CDT-30lessons -Saima 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Ms. Christina! See you later!
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group R4566-Writing G4 -2students-Catherine,Chloe 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Be sure each paragraph includes a clear topic sentence and all the facts support that topic. You have great details but I am not sure of the topic for example environmental and presentation and easy or use are all mentioned. Consider a topic sentence like One of the reason fake trees are better then real is that they are less harmful to the…[Read more]
Instead of spread a king of bad air consider adding it releases green house gases into the air
You have many good facts in your first paragraph Consider uisng alternative wording other then also use some of the suggested transitional phrases for adding information from the list which was shared for example/
4 out of every five is fake in this case consider simply restating this fact
The last sentence is a run consider where to add a period and start a new sentence. You have some counterarguments consider where you might add them in a clear fashion. for example, using terms like some think or an opppsing opion is
a week after being cut down is a bit clearer after it has been cut down . So,
1.are instead of is artficial
vicky commented on a Photo in the group R4566-Writing G4 -2students-Catherine,Chloe 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay
Heather Gil commented on a Photo in the group R4566-Writing G4 -2students-Catherine,Chloe 4 months, 3 weeks ago
i LIKE THE FUN SET UP AND PRESST DISPLAY YOU MADE.
The final reason… is a run on considering how you might break it up to make it smaller. alSO IN CONCLUSION.. REMEMBER ONLY USE AND ONCE INSTEAD PLACE A COMMA BY THE SECOND IDEA.