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In reply to: Maggie Wong wrote a new post, Chinese New Year Traditions In the twinkling of an eye, the Spring Festival is almost gone！Today I would like to introduce the most significant festival among Chinese culture. Chinese New Year is the longest festival in the Chin […] View
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great job! 🙂
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spelling correction: “counting”
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Qianmu’s homework.
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Great job! We miss Qianmu today in class. Hope to see his face on Thursday. 🙂
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Great job! Nice and neat!
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Nice sentences! Great job! 🙂
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Qianmu’s homework.
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good job!
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Sentence check: “I mean it’s better to think sweets as snack, something you eat occasionally.”
“Because sugar will result in poor health, just like what candy would do to us.
I like Barb’s angle of arguing about the negative effect of sugar.
Good job, keep up the good work,
@all
ms stella
Make sure to separate each independent clause with a comma.
The word “and” needs to connect two things that are closely related.
Correction:
Daddy likes to read books, and he has a big bookshelf for his book collection.
@all
ms stella
Comment:
I love how you picked this angle to argue the point.
However, these two points are essentially the same thing.
Please come up with a different point to back up your point. 🙂
ms stella
@barbara
I would suggest you rewrite this part in a cause and effect order.
In general, you have a very good argument especially the last point. Good job!
Keep up the good work!
@barbara
Correction: ” I look forward to seeing what my presents are very much!” “But I’m very excited about what the next presents are going to be!”
@barbara
Barb, I love how fluent your first long sentence is! Keep up the great work, my little writer!:)
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