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Overall this is well done you have done great sharing about your friend. There were a few minor grammar errors which I shared above. YOu have some great details and did well taking our outline to create a well-thought-out essay. You could consider adding some personality…[Read more]

Wonderful job with all your pages these look great if you have any questions please feel free to ask me.

Looks great wonderful work

This looks very good andrew

These are wonderfully done good work with reviewing the grammar!

Great work all your answers are well done!

This is clearly written and states your point well.

Here are a few suggestions on how yo rephrase your paragraph so it will sound a bit more fleshed out and full.
I would choose hamburgers if I had to pick my favorite food. They look delicious! The juice that drips out of them when you bite in makes a drip sound on my plate. The burger smells like meaty incense and draws you in. The bread is soft…[Read more]

These are correct great work!

This is an amazing rewrite and sounds wonderful. You have added the needed details and created a wonderful paragraph that flows from one topic to the next with really nice clear sentences.

This looks fantastic you have shared some good insights and carefully thought about the chapters you have read thus far.

Your paragraph captures the essence of what makes a perfect summer day, and you’ve included several key elements. Here are a few suggestions to enhance clarity and flow:
1. Clarity and Structure:
• Each sentence could focus on a specific aspect of a perfect summer day.
• For example, one sentence could discuss the importance of clear skies, ano…[Read more]

Rgus us well-written and very detailed. You have been able to add information that makes instructions clear. There are areas with longer wording or more than one comma consider making some sentences shorter. Keep in mind short and long variations offer a variety of sentence structures.

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Be sure each paragraph includes a clear topic sentence and all the facts support that topic. You have great details but I am not sure of the topic for example environmental and presentation and easy or use are all mentioned. Consider a topic sentence like One of the reason fake trees are better then real is that they are less harmful to the…[Read more]

Instead of spread a king of bad air consider adding it releases green house gases into the air

You have many good facts in your first paragraph Consider uisng alternative wording other then also use some of the suggested transitional phrases for adding information from the list which was shared for example/

4 out of every five is fake in this case consider simply restating this fact

The last sentence is a run consider where to add a period and start a new sentence. You have some counterarguments consider where you might add them in a clear fashion. for example, using terms like some think or an opppsing opion is